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119 deviants said yes :nod:
82 deviants said hmmm :hmm:
17 deviants said no :no:

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ladyrapid Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010  Professional Photographer
A couple of the shots are really good mate but you need a couple more higher quality shots for a higher quality calendar. Now it feels like it's a collection from 5-6 different photographers.

I'd say yes if you can use better photos.

Jan - NO, too bad light and contrast. Very low quality

Feb - NO, too dark and nothing that's interesting enough.

Mar - YES, IF!, you change it into B&W since that'd work much better. It's very low saturated now and converted to B&W and would increase it's levels and give it more contrast.

Apr - YES/NO, fairly ok shot but the composition is too easy and plain, needs more attidude. Maybe another crop can save it?

May - YES, this works, it's a decent shot and interesting enough to be able to stand alone as a photo. If possible, to NOT have the facing heart in the middle would strengthen the composition.

Jun - NO, too ordinary and can't be saved through the flip.

Jul - YES/NO, maybe too dull in light/composition. Maybe with less sky and more foreground this would get better lines?

Aug - YES, a classic sky/water shot that always works, might be better in B&W due to the contrast ratio the shot has.

Sep - YES, rays always works when the compositions are decent. If possible, structure on the sky would be great, still works without.

Oct - NO, not much right here anywhere.

Nov - NO, could've been cool if you'd composed it less flat and lifeless, doesn't cut it alone due to the composition I think.

Dec - YES, best image of the whole calendar, hands down. Nice dynamic range and contrast. Nice tones and composition, it's interesting. Nice job!

Hard critique? Yes but it's a filthy business and I know you can handle it!

Later Tobi, keep it up!

taenaron Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanks for your feedback Rob ;) I see your points and understand them. I tried a lot of different photo and ended up with a vertical calender using wide-angle phots. I have a lot more vertical shots than horizontal :/ If you have the time and bandwidth please have a look at the latest version here: [link] (20mb... I have been working with quarkxpress in the past but I just bought InDesign and I don't know yet how to produce good quality non-print pdf with only small size xD)

ah and if you want to see other versions of the horizontal calender, just change the number of the pdf to 2 or 3 ;) they are still online.
JArtN Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
Really like the calender, especially November and my month February.
CleWeR Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Das ist SEHR yes!
Plethora2008 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
I <3 September
taenaron Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010   Digital Artist
MoonlitCrescent Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
I can't see anything at the link
taenaron Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010   Digital Artist
hmmm try it again :O
MoonlitCrescent Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
Well it works, if only to let me download it as an image file.
tehmantra Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
Don't like January or May. Just my opinion though...
The rest are quite good.
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