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I proudly present my latest wallpaper. The story: You are in the captain's office right after a larger fight. The ship was heavily damaged but the homefleet was successful. At the moment you are on the search for the rest of the escaped aggressors. The captain starts to have doubts about his mission, his job and his life...
Ok I tried new things in this pic and I'm pretty happy with it's outcome. I ever wanted to creat a flight-scene with larger ships. To avoid confusion: the thing on the right side is an extraterrestrial transmitter. I thougt it's nice to implement new elements to the common stuff. It basically is a mattepainting, textures were taken from cgtextures.com. There'll be only one resolution this time (via download). It's a larger wide-screen so you shouldn't have problems by sizing it down (or adding borders for your personal scree-size).
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Wobei ich bei der Länge ne critique draus mache
1) Also ich finde es sehr gut gelungen, allerdings muss ich pebcak im Bezug auf die Risse recht geben, dies betrifft für mich aber eher die Brüche link und rechts in den Ecken (oben). Die passen schon eher zu einer kleineren Scheibe (Erkennbar am Riss diagonal durch die Glasfläche. d.h. nicht senkrecht und dünn wie bei den meisten anderen Rissen).
2) Außerdem finde ich, dass der Schatten des Objektes rechts (ist das ein Stein oder Skulptur? hat Sturman ja auch schon gefragt
3) Der Umhang des Captains und die Sichtbare Seite der Skulptur sind bei einem so starken Gegenlichteinfall und nahezu keiner entgegengerichteten Lichtquelle zu hell. Da müsste bei dem Licht einiges weniger zu erkennen sein.
4) Wie schon von Sturman gesagt, sieht der view screen leicht komisch aus. Für mich ist jetzt nicht klar erkennbar, ob das einen 3-dimensionalen, tiefen Rahmen oder nur einen Rahmen, der an der Seite ist darstellt.
Im Großen und Ganzen bin ich aber sehr beeindruckt und fasziniert von dem Bild.
the cuts in the glass are a bit distracting though. somehow it looks like the cuts are not exactly reacting to the light from the scene. maybe some more painting extensions here and there to get the most out of these cuts in the glass to get a bit more integration. i'm also referring to the fact that this window's glass should be very thick (it's space and vacuum out there)... and the cuts look a bit flat.
for me, right now, the cuts are a bit too dominant too. the rough contrast they create feel like it tears the pic apart a bit. but that's just my sight of things.
all the other parts, atmosphere, lighting... really nice. good stuff.
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