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Artist's CommentsProject GenesisMy second entry for =theluminarium's latest exhibition called "Genesis". Project Genesis is inspired by an old Star Trek movie. The project turns dead and lifeless planets into green earth-like habitats. The population of the main-planet decided to colonize the two neighboring moons and startet a Genesis missile for each. In the process of transformation, everything gets killed. The evacuation is in full progress... Maybe for you to get an impression of how it looked like in the movie: Click here for HD Quality Movie Wallpaperpack1024x7681280x1024 1440x900 1600x1200 1680x1050 1920x1200 CommentsA powerfully coloured scene here, the vibrant contrast between the orange land and blue sky sure makes a stand without looking unnatural
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toll -- My Portfolio: [link] Concept and 3D Game Artist Super Bild. Was mich persönlich etwas stört sind grundsätzlich die zu langen "trails". Auch hätte ich das Minischiff unter dem Mutterschiff weggelassen. Hier irritieren mich die Größenverhältnisse. Und ob in so einer Landschaft noch Wasser fließt? Hätte ich auch weggelassen.
Aber wie gesagt, alles Ansichtssache. Ciao Wow, amazing work!
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Technically your work is almost impeccable, it appears. The mix of complementary colors of blue and orange is nice and still not overused. The craters are awesome as well as the shape ship and their trails. The photo blends nicely, but could possibly use a bit blur for the painted look and smoothness to match the rest of the piece.
The only thing that bothers me a bit talking about the technical qualities of this image is the composition along with the length of the trails and their direction. In my opinion the trails are too long and at the same time somewhat chaotic. Especially the ship on the very far left is leading the viewer's eye out of the frame, which is not great for the composition. Additionally the scene has quite a lot of focal points which is a bit confusing, too. Nonetheless the technique is well worth 4 stars imo.
So what can I say about the impact. I love this image overall and as you can see this comment was quite a praise rather than a critique. Good job and keep it up!
Cheers
kire
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