Love the concept and the flow you have captured as well as the use of color and light. The two large birds detract from the image as they are too blurry for so close. Perhaps this is how a camera lens would pick it up but you have the artistic freedom and talent to make it as the eye would see it. I would also move the two large birds to keep within the flow of the rest of the picture to help draw the viewer in as I find that where they are make me focus on them instead of the picture, and draw my focus to the bottom left blackness of the picture. The rest of the picture is exquisite.